No story should be a riddle

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March 30, 2016 by jacklovelace

A strange story in the St. Louis Post Dispatch by Goold today.

He writes of discontent in training camp, multiple meetings.

But it is all veiled as if the CIA was controlling any real information.

Where are the specifics? Any specifics that prompted writing the story.

I realize writers who cover teams on a regular basis can’t alienate the team.

So pass it along to a columnist who can tell us what the hell you are talking about.

No story should be like a riddle and so badly detailed.

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